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Nt.
Uh yeah, I need your guyses opinion on a song I wrote yesterday. It's nothing special. I already got a cool tune for it, i just need a melody for the singing.
Well uh yeah here it is
A dragonfly flew,
Out above our heads,
Advancing toawrds the.
heavens
But where did he go?
You ask me,
To tell you the truth,
I don't know
Chorus:
Don't you remember?
Were were out in that tree
Don't you remember?
It was you and me
How could I forget?
She says to me
How could i forget?
We were so young and free
Well, the dragonfly travelde
trhoughout the sky
Over the clouds
And into the valley
n the Valley
There lay a corn field
and the field was full of
Beutiful flowers
[Chorus]
The dragonfly took off,
into the sky,
leaving the crowd,
of people behind
The people stood and stared,
into the sky,
and now the dragonfly,
he lay right in front of me
Props from someone who doesn't write, but still enough not intriguing to myself.
Nt.
-------------------I AGAINST I------------------------------------FLESH OF MY FLESH---------------------------------MIND OF MY MIND-----------------------------------TWO OF A KIND---------------------------------------BUT ONE--------------------------------------------WONT--------------------------------------------SURVIVE-----------------------
gimme the chords you got for it and i'll record it :p
i like it
i swear this tea is at a real good temperature right now
lol dont steal my song
He just wants to cover it.
Anyway, I guess those lyrics work for your kind of music.
Originally Posted by Timothy Leary
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How good this song is all depends on what kind of music it is....I like the lyrics though.. gj
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